How To Make A Good Introduction Paragraph

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The introduction of your essay or article has to capture the reader's attention right away—so it's extremely important that you nail the start of your intro! No matter what you're writing, it's essential to avoid clichés and be clear and engaging. This article lists many helpful tips for starting an intro, including several "do's" and "don't's" that are suited to a wide range of essay types. For example, here's one great tip: save writing your intro for last so you can make it perfect!

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Treat the whole of your intro as the gateway into your essay. Your introduction has to do a lot in 5 sentences or so: identify the topic, provide context, and offer your thesis or major focus. And the start of the intro in particular needs to immediately catch the reader's attention and flow seamlessly into what follows. But fear not! The key is to use efficient, engaging writing that makes every word count.^[1]
- Start your intro with an attention-grabber. The rest of this article provides several good options, like scene-setters, anecdotes, and quotations.
- Follow up with a few sentences that offer some context for the essay topic and the thesis or main focus you're about to identify.
- Finish with a single sentence that clearly lays out your primary argument or point of focus for the entire essay or article.
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Transport the reader into the world of your writing. Instead of setting the scene from a detached point of view, take the reader right into the action. For instance, you might start the intro paragraph for a war story like this: "Craters scarred the landscape. The smell of gunpowder hung in the air. In the distance, the husk of a burned-out automobile belched black smoke."^[2]
- After describing the aftermath of the battle, zoom out to describe the duration of the conflict, the reasons behind it, the long-term impact, and so on.
- Setting the scene is a great intro option for news articles, historical essays, and fiction writing, to name but a few examples.

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Anecdotes help readers connect with both informational and analytical essays. An anecdote is a brief story that relates either literally or symbolically to the topic you're writing about. For instance, if you're writing about how extremists have been infiltrating a political party, you might start the paragraph with a summation of Homer's "Iliad," focusing especially on the Trojan horse ploy.^[3]
- Alternately, you could provide a more literal anecdote. For instance, if your topic is the ecological crisis, you might provide a brief story about how quickly a certain species is going extinct.
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Surprise the reader to draw them into your interpretive or opinion essay. A bold statement is one that startles or amazes readers. For instance, it could be a statistic like "7 people under the age of 20 are shot every day." You could also provide an unusual fact. For example, you might write about how sand shark embryos eat their gestating counterparts while still in the womb.^[4]
- Anything that instantly hooks readers and draws them in is a great start for an introduction!^[5]

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Lend weight to a research-based essay by using an authoritative source. Don't just name-drop or use a random, cool-sounding quote—choose a relevant person or quote that carries authority on the topic. Run internet searches for quotes that are on your topic, especially ones from well-known people. Politicians, captains of industry, religious leaders, scientists, scholars, artists, and athletes can often provide relevant quotes.^[6]
- If you start your opening paragraph with a quote, you may find it helpful to make a callback to the quote in your closing statement. Consider an ending hook that addresses the meaning of your quote to bring the argument full-circle.
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This helps orient readers about the topic of a scholarly essay. The introductory paragraph is often the best place to lay out how people generally think about a topic. For instance, say your research topic is about how tattoos are central to Maori culture. In this case, you might open your intro paragraph with some background information about Maori society, references to the larger body of scholarship on Maori tattoos, or quotes from the first historical accounts about them.^[7]
- Using your introductory paragraph to provide more context can be really helpful for readers, especially if they're not well-versed on the topic. It helps them better understand the relevant points of the topic that your essay debunks, refines, or expands upon^[8]

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Provide clear, concise details right away in a news article or informative essay. Immediately giving the 5 W's (who, what, when, where, why), as well as the "how," helps readers decide if they should continue reading. However, instead of writing an intro that's jam-packed with 5 W's details, strip them down to their essential components. Give readers the info they need, but do it efficiently and effectively.^[9]
- For instance, instead of writing, "President Jones declared in a joint session of Congress today that he will work with his counterparts abroad to reorganize international fiscal policy and lending practices, making it easier to distribute international aid," you could write, "A new law aims to fast-track international aid to developing nations."
- Here's an example that gives lots of details without going overboard: "On Saturday, a local librarian unexpectedly became a foster mother to 5 kittens when an unknown person left them on the library doorstep. Lucille Jenkins, 35, says she took the kittens in because 'it was the right thing to do.'"
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This change-of-pace move for news articles can help set your story apart. By starting your intro paragraph with a bit of analysis, you can explore in greater depth the ramifications of a well-known story or a story that has been covered elsewhere. In this case, instead of providing the five W's, you focus much more specifically on the "how" of the topic.^[10]
- For instance, instead of describing or reporting on the actual details of a public policy and how it moved through the legislative process, use the start of your introductory paragraph to explain how the policy will change society or the lives of those affected.
- An analytical lede might also include information regarding who benefits and why, but the primary focus should be on explaining how a news item or event works, rather than merely describing it.

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Focus on your topic instead of making overly broad or hackneyed statements. All writers, even the great ones, sometimes fall into the trap of using "cosmic statement" clichés like "There are two sides to every issue," "Since time immemorial," and "For many years…" But you can resist this off-putting urge! Instead, cite a specific historical range (when relevant) or specific cultural conditions, and keep your writing centered on the subject or issue under examination.^[11]
- For example, instead of "People have been making cloth since the dawn of time," you might say, "The prehistoric Egyptians were producing high-quality linen cloth as early as 5000 BC."
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This type of intro is usually considered uninspired and trite. It seems like a good idea at first, but the dictionary definition intro has been so overdone that it nearly always pushes the reader away instead of drawing them in. Sure, use the dictionary definition for your own reference, but aim for an intro that's more creative and challenging and offers your reader new information.^[12]
- If you feel obligated to delineate more clearly what you're writing about, that's fine, but do it without directly referring to dictionary definitions.
- Once in a blue moon, it may actually be helpful to start with a dictionary definition. For example, you might do so if you are discussing an extremely difficult-to-define term or concept, or writing about the meaning or origin of a word. But consider alternatives first!

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Writing with confidence draws in readers, so believe in yourself! For instance, don't start your intro paragraph with unnecessary qualifiers like "I think…" or "I believe..." or "In my opinion…" Instead, just state the facts, lay out the case, or set the scene with a convincing, authoritative voice that makes it clear that your writing is worth reading. Trust in your writing and your reader!^[13]
- For instance, compare the following and take note of how 3 little words can make a huge difference in how authoritative and confident each sentence reads:
  - "In my opinion, 'Ozymandias,' Shelley's famous poem, reveals the impermanence of human achievement."
  - "'Ozymandias,' Shelly's famous poem, reveals the impermanence of human achievement."
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Wait so you can craft a killer intro that perfectly suits your essay. Write a generic intro if you want, then fill out your body paragraphs, and only then analyze what you have and reconsider your intro. This strategy gives you more time to consider the connections between your own writing and other material on the topic, or connections between the many elements within your article or essay.^[14]
- The opening line of your intro is the first impression that will color how everything you write after that is perceived by the reader. So take your time and make it count!
- Write the conclusion next-to-last and the intro last, or vice versa. Aim for them to connect and relate perfectly.

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What are the most important things to include in an introductory paragraph?

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Definitely start with a hook to get the reader's attention. Once you have their attention, give them context about what you're going to talk about and how you're going to talk about it. Show them why they should care about what you're talking about. At the end of your intro, state your claim that you're going to prove and make your argument very clear.
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What should I include in the introduction for a persuasive essay?

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You have to commit to a particular side of an argument if you're doing a persuasive essay. If you're doing research, make it clear what you're setting out to prove. Don't be a flip-flopper in that sense—don't try to get the broadest possible audience by saying that you believe both sides of the argument are right.
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Should I start an argumentative essay with a question?

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It's really a matter of personal taste. It matters how relevant the question is to the argument that's being had. I do think that starting with a question can help get the reader into this mindset of questioning something. And that can be a good thing, especially if you're dealing with a highly controversial topic.
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How do you write a good introduction for an essay?

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Stick to the basics and be as clear as you possibly can. Essays are designed to convey an argument or thesis, so you don't want there to be any confusion. Think of your introduction as being a gateway for the rest of your essay. The start of your intro has to immediately catch the reader's attention, and it also needs to flow seamlessly into the rest of the intro. The intro of any type of essay or article must identify the topic, give important context details, and offer your thesis or major focus. Use efficient, engaging writing that makes every word count. It's usually a good idea to start with a sentence that grabs the reader's attention followed by a few sentences that give some background and context for the topic of your essay. End your introduction with a single sentence that clearly and directly states the thesis or your primary argument or focus for your whole essay. That way, people know exactly what the whole point of the essay is from the very beginning.
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What words can I use to start an introduction?

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Ideally, you want to use words and sentences that really grab the reader's attention at the start of your introduction. That way your readers will want to keep reading and they aren't confused by any arguments or points that you're making. One way to do that is to use an anecdote or analogy so help your readers mentally connect with your essay before you dive into the information and data of the rest of the essay. An anecdote is a brief story that relates either literally or symbolically to the topic you're writing about. For example, if you're writing an essay on hypocrisy in a political party, you could start by talking about Oedipus gouging out his eyes to avoid looking at his own mistakes. Anecdotes are interesting, and they can make your arguments resonate with your readers.
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How many sentences should an introduction have?

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Generally, around 5 sentences should cover everything you want to cover in a proper introduction. You'll want to have a strong, attention-grabbing first sentence and then a few sentences that give some context and background information about the topic or focus of your essay. For instance, if you're writing about the impact of a new law, you could talk about the history behind the law and how it was passed to set the scene and give your readers some more knowledge about the topic. Your final sentence should be your thesis. It should be a strong, direct sentence that clearly relays the main point or argument behind your entire essay. That way, readers are clear about what you're going to try to prove.

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After crafting your intro paragraph, read the whole thing out loud. This will help you sense whether the start of the introductory paragraph meshes well with its middle and end. As you read, listen for logical inconsistencies, unclear passages, missing details, and spelling or grammar errors.^[15]
Edit the intro paragraph for filler. Only keep passages that demonstrate your knowledge and understanding of the topic.
Get others' opinions. They may catch errors or inconsistencies that you missed. Let them read the intro, then ask questions like "Did the wording make sense to you?" and "Does this make you want to keep reading?"

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To start an introductory paragraph, give some background information about the subject you'll be discussing. For example, if your essay is about the importance of tattoos in Maori culture, begin with an interesting fact about Maori society or a quote about tattoos. Alternatively, start with a brief story to capture the readers' attention. You can also lead off with a bold or surprising statement, or a fact related to your topic, which will pique the reader's curiosity and make them want to keep reading. For advice from our Education co-author on how to incorporate a famous quote into your introductory paragraph, read on!

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